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Chapter 2 of 22

Bhavishyavaani (The Prophecy)

Chapter 1: The Mirror Maze

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The maze smelled of old magic and fresh terror.

Falani stood at the entrance to the courtyard of Chandrika Durga — the Moon Fortress, seat of Elvarath's power — and tried to remember how to breathe. The space she knew, the wide cobblestoned expanse where she had trained and laughed and argued, had been transformed into something that made her skin crawl. An enclosed dome of mirrors stretched in every direction, silver surfaces multiplying her reflection into infinity. Hundreds of Falanis stared back at her, each one wearing the same expression of poorly concealed panic.

She shivered. The cold was the only anchor to reality — that, and the rough cobblestones she could feel through the thin soles of her boots. Everything else was illusion. Layers upon layers of it, woven by the Chandrika's most powerful Tantrics, led by Chrysanth, who specialised in such constructions.

Ishira stood beside her. The other woman's face was a mask of composure, but her fingers were white-knuckled around the edges of her dark cloak.

They had spent two days in isolation, separately, under heavy guard. No hint of what awaited them. When the preparations were complete, they had been escorted to the courtyard for the Pareeksha — the Challenge.

Both wore identical dark dresses, gloves, boots, and warm cloaks. Falani had been expressly forbidden from wearing anything unconventional. Which meant no trousers, no borrowed soldier's jacket, none of the practical clothes she preferred. Just this infernal dress that tangled around her ankles every third step.

"Once you both cross this line, the Pareeksha begins," her grandfather, Chandrashekhar, instructed. His voice was calm, but Falani caught the tension in his jaw. "We will observe from beyond the illusion. You will not see or hear the audience. We are present, however, and we will intervene if either of you faces genuine danger."

Falani swallowed. The sound was embarrassingly loud.

"Ishira will move left. Falani, to the right. The maze will guide you back together after you have each endured your individual trials. If one fails, the other wins by default. If both succeed and meet, you must duel with your Vidya."

He placed a weathered hand on each of their shoulders. The weight of his palm was steady and warm through Falani's cloak — a grandfather's hand, not a judge's. "This is not a battle of physical prowess. It tests endurance, skill, and wit. Should you encounter each other, the first to draw blood wins."

He paused, his dark eyes moving between them. "And this is not a fight to the death. You are forbidden from causing the other serious harm. The individual trials will not injure you permanently, either."

Falani was not remotely assured. She could hear the massive crowd beyond the illusion — the buzz of hundreds of conversations, shuffling feet, the rustle of silk and cotton, the distant clatter of someone's steel thali dropping in the kitchens. The smell of dal fry and fresh rotis drifted in, absurdly domestic against the high-stakes tension.

When entering the courtyard, she had spotted Karan and his Rajmandal entourage. The prince had made a full recovery from his duel with Kshitij — the duel that still made Falani's stomach tighten with guilt when she thought about it. She had also embraced Kshitij, who had assured her that everything would be fine, win or lose.

She was not sure she wanted to win, if she was honest. What business did she — a princess of Tejasunaa — have becoming the next High Priestess of Elvarath? To lead a coterie of Tantrics who had trained since childhood, when she had only discovered her own Vidya a few months ago? She felt like a fraud. An imposter. Her grandmother being the current High Priestess was irrelevant. The position was earned, never inherited.

I really did ask for this.* The thought was bitter. *On that day when I convinced Lydia we should disguise ourselves as boys and follow Father's army to Elvarath. Lydia should have smacked me and dragged me straight to Father.

She breathed deeply. The cold air burned her lungs and tasted faintly of iron — the residue of old magic worked into the stones of the courtyard over centuries.

"Falani?" Chandrashekhar prompted gently.

She nodded. Ishira was already past the line.


The moment Falani stepped right, warm steam blasted her face.

She gasped, swiping at her eyes, but only succeeded in smearing the moisture across her cheeks. Some of it entered her mouth — sweet, not water. The taste was honeyed and herbal, like crushed tulsi leaves steeped in jaggery syrup. The smell hit her next: floral, intoxicating, with an undertone that made her thoughts feel like they were being stirred with a slow spoon.

Some potion. That's why it was sweet.

The mirrors closed in around her. Reflections fractured and multiplied until she couldn't tell which direction she had come from. The light dimmed, then dimmed further, until she was walking through twilight made of silver surfaces and her own distorted face.

Her head went light. Disconnected. The sensation of floating — like she had drunk three cups of strong toddy on an empty stomach. Her legs kept moving because her mind was too addled to tell them to stop.

A shadow flickered past her. Close enough that she felt the displaced air brush her cheek.

Falani flinched, her heart slamming against her ribs hard enough to bruise.

No harm,* she told herself. *No harm.

We will see the ugly in us.* Ishira had told her that morning, over a hurried meal of hot rasam and warm roti. *The first part is where we face our inner selves. We see what is ugliest in us.

A blast of heat and blinding light seared her vision. She yelped and stumbled backwards, arms shielding her face. When she lowered them, the darkness remained — but standing before her, wreathed in flame that danced in his palms, was—

"Kshitij?"

He looked wrong. Cold. Cruel. His eyes — the eyes she had come to trust above all others — were flat and empty, like coins laid on a dead man's lids.

"Get away from me," he snarled.

"Why? What is wrong?" She stepped forward. The heat from his flames prickled her exposed skin. He looked and sounded exactly like Kshitij. If she could just touch him—

"I used you, Falani."

The words punched through her chest. "What?" she whispered.

His sneer was something she had never seen on his face. It made him look like a different person entirely. "Just as you feared, is it not? That I merely used you. The Prince was right about me all along."

It is not real. It is not real. That is not Kshitij.

She steeled herself and strode forward, but before she could reach him, he choked. His eyes widened in horror. The flames in his palms guttered and died. His hands scrabbled at his back, where the fletching of an arrow protruded between his shoulder blades.

And behind him, bow in hand, materialised—

"Karan? No! What have you done?" Falani's voice cracked.

Karan's laugh was mocking, hollow, nothing like the warm sound she remembered. Kshitij collapsed — the impact of his body hitting the mirrored floor rang through her bones like a temple bell struck wrong. Then he vanished. Karan, too.

Not real,* she repeated, clutching the words like a mantra. *Not real.

A hand seized her wrist. The grip was ice-cold, the skin rough as dried leather, and the smell that hit her — rot, thick and sweet and suffocating, like a funeral pyre that has been left to smoulder for days — made her gag.

Preta!

Instinct exploded through her. She bolted, crashing into mirrors, palms slamming against glass surfaces that sent shockwaves up her arms. She was going to be covered in bruises. The space was too tight to run — she half-stumbled, half-crawled, using her hands to navigate, glass smooth and freezing under her fingers.

Flashes of light erupted around her. Silhouettes coalesced from the brightness.

"Father?" She squinted. "Fareed?"

But they looked wrong. Especially Fareed. She had never seen her brother so furious — his face was the colour of sindoor, his jaw clenched so tight the muscles in his neck stood out like ropes.

"You should have married and remained in Tejasunaa, Falani," Fareed said.

"My brother would never say that!"

"But you made your choice. You abandoned us."

"Abandoned? That is not—"

"You could have had a good life here, sister. Instead you chose people you barely know, a life you do not understand. For what? Do you know how hurt we are? How disappointed?"

"You will come to nothing!" her father roared, and the sound of it — her father's voice twisted into something unrecognizable — sliced through her like a serrated blade.

Her eyes burned. It is not real. None of this is real.

But it stung worse than Kshitij's words. The shame was old and deep, a little girl's fear wearing an adult woman's face. She wanted to fold herself into the earth and disappear.

We will see the ugly in us.

The illusions were excavating her — digging into the soft places where doubt lived, pulling out fears she had never spoken aloud, fears she had not even admitted to herself. She wondered how much of this the audience could see. She wondered if the sweet steam had been a hallucinogenic potion. It had to be.

Her father and Fareed dissolved into shadows that reformed into—

Mother.

Not the cold, bitter woman who lived in Elvarath now. The mother from childhood. Young. Warm. The scent of mogra hit Falani so hard her knees buckled — her mother's perfume, the one she had worn when Falani was small enough to be carried, when the world was safe because Ma was in it.

"Alvida..." Mother whispered.

No. Please. Do not go.

The illusion shifted. A tiny winged figure hovered before Falani, head drooping. A Pari. Vanya.

Falani had promised to rescue her. Months had passed. The promise sat in her chest like a stone.

"I am so sorry..." Her voice cracked. "When this is over—"

The tiny figure's head snapped up and she screamed — a sound far too large for her body, a sound that buried itself in Falani's ears like hot needles.

A shadow loomed beside her. The gleeful face of the Vanachari who had captured Vanya. Every fibre of Falani's being ignited.

"Come here!" she screamed, a mantra on the tip of her tongue, hands thrust forward — but the illusion dissolved into silver nothingness.

Silence. Darkness. The sound of her own ragged breathing and the hammering of her pulse.

Then — light. Flooding, sudden, too bright. She squinted against it.

A figure stood several paces away. Dishevelled, pale, shaking.

"Ishira?"

Ishira's head jerked. "Falani?" Her voice was thin as paper.

Relief crashed through Falani like a wave. "It is me. Is it you?"

Ishira's answer was to narrow her eyes, step back, and fire an icy arrow directly at Falani's head.

Falani threw herself sideways. The arrow shrieked past her ear — she felt its frozen wake brush her skin — and shattered against a mirror with a sound like breaking bangles. Her shoulder rammed into another glass surface, the impact jarring through her entire skeleton. Her sleeve ripped. Another dress ruined.

"I was not ready!" she shouted.

"In battle, you must always be ready!" Ishira yelled, already weaving her next mantra.

"So now you choose to instruct me. Wonderful."

Ishira smirked. "Better late than never."

Falani dodged the next volley — three arrows of ice that whistled through the air with the sound of tearing silk — and muttered her own mantra. Her specialty was phytonic Vidya — the power to command plant life. There was nothing to command in this mirror maze. No soil, no roots, no—

Wait. The cobblestones. Gaps between them. Tiny gaps, but gaps.

Her hands moved in tandem with the words tumbling from her lips. She felt the familiar tremor beneath her feet — the response of dormant life buried under stone.

Ishira yelped. A short, thick vine had erupted from between the cobblestones and coiled around her ankle like a python. She yanked, furious, but the vine held.

First to draw blood.

Falani stalked forward. The vine was climbing. Slowly. Agonisingly slowly — because plants grew at the speed of plants, not the speed of desperation. Tiny thorns were beginning to sprout along the vine's surface. Once they reached Ishira's bare skin above her boot—

Ishira's counter-mantra was faster. Falani's legs flew out from under her as a gust of freezing wind hammered her chest. She landed hard on her back, the impact driving the air from her lungs in a brutal whoosh. The cobblestones were merciless against her spine.

"I have you stuck," Ishira said, "but I can still draw first blood."

"Not yet," Falani wheezed.

"Soon, dear. Soon!"

Multiple ice arrows — sharp, fast, gleaming — flew toward her. Falani whipped her cloak up as a shield. The arrows slammed into the thick fabric and shattered, sending shards skittering across the ground like scattered rice at a wedding. No open wounds, but she could already feel the bruises forming.

The vine climbed higher. Thorns inched toward bare skin.

Something ice-cold clamped around Falani's throat — a chain of frozen air, tightening like a noose. She gagged, fingers scrabbling at the unyielding collar. Her vision began to spot.

Not... supposed... to choke me!

A pellet of ice — small, precise — struck her cheekbone. The chain instantly released. Falani doubled over, gasping, pulling air into her starving lungs in great ragged gulps. She touched her cheek. Her fingertips came away red.

Blood.

She looked at Ishira, who was still wrestling with the vine. One of its thorns had come within a hair's breadth of piercing her calf. Had Ishira not choked Falani and fired that final precise shot, the thorn would have drawn blood first.

Falani muttered the counter-mantra. The vine released its grip and slithered back into the gap between cobblestones.

Ishira wobbled free, arms flailing — looking far less dignified than a future High Priestess should. Falani laughed despite everything.

"HALT!"

Chandrashekhar's voice boomed through the maze. The illusion dissolved like sugar in hot chai. The mirrors became painted wooden scaffolds. The dome became open sky.

The Pareeksha was over.

And Falani had lost.


The courtyard erupted. Voices — hundreds of them — crashed over Falani like a physical force. After the eerie silence of the maze, the noise was almost unbearable.

Maharani Manjari examined Ishira's leg, then Falani's cheek. The cut was shallow — the ice pellet had barely broken the surface — but blood was blood.

"You are not disappointed, are you?" Falani whispered as her grandmother cleaned the wound with a cloth that smelled sharply of neem.

Manjari's smile was a sunrise. "Not at all. I am proud of everything I saw."

"You saw everything? Even the illusions? Even my mother—"

"You saw your mother?"

"You mean you did not?"

"We saw only you, child. The maze, the mirrors, and the potion did the rest. Chrysanth and her team wove the illusions from the fabric of your own mind — your memories, your fears." Manjari patted her shoulder with a hand that was papery-thin but steady as bedrock. "No one saw what you saw. We will speak more later."

She took Falani's hand and led her to Ishira. With her free hand, she grasped the other young woman's fingers. "You have earned this," Manjari said.

Ishira's face glowed.

Manjari turned to the expectant audience, raising Ishira's hand high. "The High Priestess Heir!" she proclaimed, her voice amplified by Vidya until it rang off the stone walls of Chandrika Durga like a bell. "Ishira Hilaria!"

The applause was a living thing — a roar that rose from the courtyard and climbed the fortress walls and shook the air in Falani's chest. She watched Ishira get swept into a tide of congratulations and felt... relief. Sharp, surprising, undeniable relief.

It was never supposed to be me.

Kshitij approached, and Falani stiffened. The illusion's version of him — cruel, sneering — was still fresh enough to make her flinch.

He noticed. Of course he noticed. "I appeared in your Pareeksha, did I not?"

"You were awful," she said, her voice tight. "If I ever catch you saying those things—"

He laughed — warm, real, nothing like the illusion — and the sound dissolved the last of her fear the way sunlight dissolves frost. "I do not even know what I said! It was not real!"

"Thank the Sun for that."

Karan appeared behind Kshitij. "Was I in it?"

Falani's heart lurched. The memory of the arrow buried in Kshitij's back, Karan's mocking laughter—

"Just... I saw..." she faltered.

"No need to say more," Karan interrupted with a smirk. "I fought with Kshitij again, and this time, I won decisively. Am I right?"

She winced. "Not exactly."

"I won?" Kshitij asked.

Falani's mind flashed back to the arrow between his shoulders. The thud of his body. She suppressed a shudder. "Nobody won. Let us leave it at that."

The evening feast awaited, and Pratap was eager to celebrate with mead and music in the great dining hall. But as Falani allowed herself to be pulled along, she glanced back at the courtyard one last time.

The wooden scaffolds were being dismantled. The painted silver was already peeling. And somewhere in the gaps between the cobblestones, a tiny vine had retreated into the dark earth — waiting, patient, alive.

Just like the feeling in Falani's chest that whispered: your time will come.

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