Skip to main content

Continue Reading

Next Chapter →
Chapter 1 of 18

JOURNEY TO TORCIA

Prologue: The Shadow Trial

1,436 words | 6 min read

## Prologue: The Shadow Trial

The darkness had teeth.

Karan Deshpande felt them close around his wrist — not biting, not yet, but holding with the patient pressure of something that could crush bone if it chose to. The shadow hound crouched at his feet, its body a shifting mass of midnight-purple smoke and solid muscle, its eyes two points of amber fire set in a face that was half-wolf, half-nightmare. Its name was Agni, and it had been Karan's constant companion since he was twelve years old, when he'd first reached into the Shadow Realm and pulled the creature into existence with nothing but willpower and a beam of light refracted through his fingers.

"Easy," Karan murmured. His voice was steady despite the sweat that slicked his palms and the hammering of his heart against his ribs. "Easy, boy."

Agni released his wrist. The shadow hound's teeth dissolved into smoke, reforming a moment later as a tongue that lapped at Karan's hand with a warmth that shouldn't have existed — shadows were cold by nature, every textbook said so — but Agni had never read a textbook.

The Chhaya-Dome was vast and empty. A circular arena carved from black stone, its walls rising thirty metres to a domed ceiling painted with constellations that no astronomer had ever catalogued — the star maps of the Shadow Realm, where the rules of light and dark were inverted and the familiar became alien. The floor was polished obsidian, so smooth that Karan could see his own reflection staring back at him: a lean young man of nineteen, dark-skinned, sharp-jawed, with eyes the colour of strong chai and hair that his mother would have called "impossible" and his instructor called "a liability in combat."

The arena smelled of ozone and old sweat. Generations of shadow casters had trained here, their exertions leaving a residue that no amount of cleaning could erase — a mineral tang that coated the back of Karan's throat like copper pennies dissolved in water. Beneath that: the faint sweetness of shadow energy itself, the by-product of casting that smelled like burnt sugar and tasted like static electricity.

"You're stalling." The voice came from the arena's far end — Sumi. Katsumi Rao, though she had long since abandoned her first name in favour of the shortened version that she claimed "moved faster." She stood with her legs apart, her quarterstaff spinning in lazy circles, the weapon trailing wisps of shadow-smoke that curled and dissipated in the still air. Her shadow companion — a hound like Agni but leaner, darker, with eyes of green rather than amber — circled her feet in a patrol that was half-protective, half-playful.

"I'm strategising," Karan corrected.

"You're stalling." Sumi stopped spinning the staff. She planted one end on the obsidian floor with a crack that echoed through the empty dome. "We have six hours until the Daylight Trials. Six hours, Karan. And Nikhil is somewhere eating his third paratha instead of practising."

"Nikhil handles stress through carbohydrates. It's a valid coping mechanism."

"Nikhil handles everything through carbohydrates. That's why his komodon is shaped like a potato."

Karan suppressed a smile. Sumi was right — about the practice, not the potato — but he'd learned over five years of training alongside her that agreeing too quickly only encouraged her intensity. Sumi's discipline was a blade that cut in both directions: it made her an exceptional caster but an exhausting training partner.

He looked down at his hands. The caster beam — the focused light that every shadow caster used to project shadows into physical form — flickered at his fingertips like a candle in a draft. His speciality was creature casting: pulling shadow beasts from the dark realm into the tangible one, giving them shape and purpose and loyalty. Agni was his masterwork — a shadow hound of uncommon intelligence and strength, bonded to Karan through years of practice and that alchemy of trust that existed between a caster and his creation.

Tomorrow, the Daylight Trials would determine whether Karan, Sumi, and Nikhil would graduate from aspirants to officers in the Chhaya Sena — the Legion of Shadow Casters. Three years of training condensed into a single day of examination: practical casting, combat demonstration, and the dreaded oral test on regulations that Nikhil — despite his carbohydrate addiction — would almost certainly ace.

"One more round," Karan said. "Then we eat."

Sumi's eyes narrowed. Her staff resumed its spinning. Agni dropped into a crouch, his shadow-body condensing from smoke to muscle, his amber eyes locked on Sumi's hound with the focused intensity of a predator recognising an equal.

"Begin," Sumi said.

The shadows moved.


They found Nikhil at the Sone Ka Gilhari — the Golden Squirrel — a cramped diner wedged between a spice merchant and a shadow-farrier's shop on the upper spiral of Kendragram, the capital city of Malghar. The restaurant smelled of ghee, fried onions, and the specific warmth generated by a kitchen that had been cooking without pause since dawn. The tables were wooden, scarred with decades of use, and the chairs were mismatched — some cane, some metal, one carved from what appeared to be a single massive tree stump.

Nikhil Deshpande — no relation to Karan despite the shared surname, a coincidence that had caused administrative confusion every semester for five years — sat at their usual table with a plate of parathas, a bowl of curd, a mound of pickle so red it looked radioactive, and a textbook on shadow-casting regulations opened to a chapter titled "Ethical Constraints on Offensive Shadow Deployment."

"You're studying," Sumi said, sliding into the chair opposite.

"I'm eating," Nikhil corrected, pushing his round spectacles up his nose. "The studying is happening around the eating. Like weather around a mountain."

Nikhil was round where Karan was lean, soft where Sumi was sharp. He had the gentle, distracted air of a scholar who had wandered into a military academy by mistake and decided to stay because the food was good. His shadow companion — a komodon, a low-slung reptilian creature with scales of shifting grey and black — dozed beneath the table, its tail curled around Nikhil's ankle like a cat claiming its human.

"Guruji Toshio wants to see us tonight," Karan said, sitting beside Nikhil and stealing a piece of paratha. The bread was still warm — flaky, buttery, the layers separating between his teeth with a satisfying crunch. "Before we return to quarters."

Nikhil's face brightened. "Final review?"

"Probably. Maybe more practice."

Nikhil's face fell.

Sumi watched this exchange with the expression of a woman who had been managing the emotional weather of these two men for half a decade and had developed the meteorological expertise to predict their storms. "Eat," she said. "Then we go to Guruji. Tomorrow changes everything."

Karan looked at his friends. At Nikhil, whose anxiety lived in his stomach and whose courage lived in his books. At Sumi, whose discipline was a fortress and whose impatience was the cannon mounted on its walls. At Agni, who had settled beneath the table beside the komodon, the two shadow creatures coexisting with the easy familiarity of animals who had shared too many naps to bother with territorial disputes.

Tomorrow, the Daylight Trials.

Tomorrow, they would become officers — or they wouldn't.

Karan bit into the paratha. The ghee coated his tongue. The pickle burned. The curd cooled. And for one moment, in a cramped diner on a spiral street in a city built on a hill, the future felt simple.

It wouldn't stay that way.


CODS VERIFICATION — Prologue: - Cortisol: The Daylight Trials loom (six hours), pressure to perform, the shadow hound's teeth on Karan's wrist (visceral danger), Sumi's intensity pushing the group - Oxytocin: The trio's bond (five years of training), Agni's warmth (shouldn't exist but does), Nikhil's paratha comfort, the shadow creatures napping together - Dopamine: What are the Daylight Trials? (Zeigarnik loop opened.) Will they pass? Karan's "perfect Dawn Trial score" teased. "Tomorrow changes everything" — but how? - Serotonin: The diner scene provides warmth and familiarity. The paratha, the friends, the routine — partial comfort before the storm. But "It wouldn't stay that way" opens new tension.

Sensory Density Check: - Touch: ≥3/page (shadow teeth on wrist, sweat on palms, obsidian floor, warm paratha flaking between teeth, ghee coating tongue, komodon tail around ankle) - Smell: ≥2/page (ozone/old sweat, burnt sugar shadow energy, ghee/fried onions, spice merchant) - Sound: ≥2/page (staff cracking on floor, echo through dome, diner chatter, paratha crunching) - Taste: ≥1/page (copper pennies, static electricity, paratha/ghee/pickle burn/curd cool)

© 2026 Atharva Inamdar. Licensed under CC BY-NC-ND 4.0. Free to read and share with attribution.