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Chapter 7 of 27

PUNARMRITYU: The Beast of Patala

Chapter 6: Ketaki

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She arrived on a day when Arjun was hanging upside down from a stalactite, channelling raw siddhi through his tail while Guruji threw rocks at him.

The exercise — Guruji's invention, because conventional training methodologies had apparently bored him sometime around 3000 BCE — was designed to teach multi-point awareness. Channel siddhi through one body part while using another body part to defend against incoming projectiles. The rocks were not small. The rocks were the size of cricket balls. And Guruji's throwing arm, powered by the casual strength of a being who had once thrown mountains, delivered them at speeds that Arjun's Shabdadrishti could barely track.

A rock connected with his ribs. He grunted, lost the siddhi flow, and dropped — catching a lower stalactite with one hand, swinging, landing on the cave floor in a crouch that his Vanara body performed with instinctive grace even as his ribs screamed with the blunt-force protest of bone that had been asked to absorb too much.

"Kharab," Guruji said from his throwing position. Bad.

"Meri pasliyan toot gayi hain," Arjun wheezed. My ribs are broken.

"Do hi toh hain. Theek ho jayengi raat tak. Phir se."

Only two. They'll heal by tonight. Again.

It was at this moment that the sound of footsteps echoed from the passage that led to the shack. Not the heavy footsteps of a large creature — light steps, precise, the gait of someone who knew exactly where to place each foot and why. Guruji's head turned. Arjun's echolocation mapped the approaching figure: bipedal, humanoid, slim, carrying something long and thin — a staff, or a weapon.

She emerged from the passage and stopped.

She was Naga. Not the massive serpentine Nagas that patrolled the jungle — a humanoid Naga, the kind that the Puranas described as the rulers of Patala's serpent kingdoms. Her lower body was human — legs, feet, the upright posture of a biped — but her skin had the faint shimmer of scales, iridescent green-blue that caught the crystal-light and scattered it. Her eyes were amber, slit-pupilled, set in a face that was sharp and angular and entirely devoid of the softness that Arjun's human brain associated with femininity. Her hair was black, long, bound in a practical braid that reached her waist. She wore armour — light, segmented, the plates overlapping like the scales they mimicked.

She carried a staff. Carved wood, the top crowned with a crystal that glowed with a faint blue light. The crystal was not decorative — Arjun's Shakti Darshan registered it as a siddhi conduit, a tool for channelling and directing spiritual energy. The staff of a practitioner.

"Guruji," she said. Her voice was cool. Precise. The voice of someone who measured her words the way an apothecary measures poisons — exactly enough, no more.

"Ketaki," Guruji said. And smiled. The smile transformed his face — the severe, sadistic training master replaced by something warmer, something that suggested history between them, familiarity, the easy recognition of two people who had known each other for a very long time. "Wapas aa gayi?"

You've come back?

"Kaam khatam hua. Narada ne mujhe Bhogavati se chutti di." The work is finished. Narada released me from Bhogavati.

She looked at Arjun. The amber eyes assessed him with a thoroughness that was, if anything, more clinical than Guruji's. She took in the fur, the scars, the broken ribs visible as a bulge beneath the fur where the bone had displaced, the general appearance of a Vanara who had been used as target practice for a being of incomprehensible power.

"Yeh kaun hai?" Who is this?

"Mera naya shishya," Guruji said. My new student.

Her eyebrows — scaled ridges above the amber eyes — rose fractionally. "Tumne shishya liya? Kitne saal baad?"

You took a student? After how many years?

"Bahut saal. Lekin yeh — " he gestured at Arjun, who was still crouched on the floor holding his ribs and trying to look dignified, which was difficult when you were a fur-covered monkey-man who had just been knocked off a stalactite by a thrown rock "— yeh different hai."

"Kaise different?"

Guruji didn't answer. Instead he looked at Arjun with an expression that Arjun had learned to dread — the expression that preceded a test.

"Arjun," Guruji said. "Ketaki Nagavanshi. Bhogavati ki archivist. Ritual magic ki expert. Aur meri purani shishya — bahut, bahut purani."

Arjun. Ketaki of the Naga clan. Archivist of Bhogavati. Expert in ritual magic. And my former student — very, very former.

Ketaki's expression did not change. The revelation that she was a former student of the immortal warrior-sage was apparently not news to her, and Arjun's impressed stare was apparently not a reaction she valued.

"Mushti Vanar," she said, reading his Shakti Darshan with a glance — her eyes flickering gold as her own interface activated, scanning him with the efficiency of a barcode reader. "Level satais. Ek active ability, ek permanent passive, aur — " she paused. Her eyes narrowed. "Raw siddhi manipulation? Is level par?"

Level twenty-seven. One active ability, one permanent passive, and — raw siddhi manipulation? At this level?

"Haan," Guruji said. And smiled again. The pride in the smile was unmistakable — the pride of a teacher whose student has just surprised a peer.

Ketaki looked at Arjun again. The assessment was different this time — not clinical but curious. The curiosity of an archivist who has encountered something that doesn't fit the existing records.

"Tum Mrityuloka se ho," she said. Not a question. You are from the mortal world.

"Mumbai," Arjun said. His Vanara speech had improved enormously over the weeks of training — the vocal cords strengthening, the pronunciation sharpening, the language centres in his brain adapting to produce the sounds that this body's anatomy allowed. He sounded almost normal now. Almost human. Except for the slight primate rasp that gave every word a texture, a grittiness, as if the words had been dragged over sandpaper on their way out.

"Mumbai," she repeated. The word was unfamiliar to her — a mortal city name in a realm where mortal cities were abstract concepts, as real and as distant as the stars were to a deep-sea fish. "Aur tum bus accident mein mare?"

And you died in a bus accident?

Arjun stared. "Tumhe kaise pata?"

How do you know?

"Syphoning records. Main archivist hoon — records access mera kaam hai. Tumhara entry log read kiya tha." She said this without apology. Reading his personal death records was professional activity, not invasion. "332 Limited. Eastern Express Highway. Tyre burst on Ghatkopar flyover. Taintalees passengers. Sattaees dead."

332 Limited. Eastern Express Highway. Tyre burst on Ghatkopar flyover. Forty-three passengers. Twenty-seven dead.

Twenty-seven. The number hit Arjun with a force that his broken ribs barely registered. Twenty-seven people. Dead. On a bus that was seventeen minutes late because Mumbai traffic was what it was and BEST schedules were aspirational documents rather than commitments.

"Tum ek-maat-reborn ho is batch mein," Ketaki continued. "Baaki chhabbees Void mein gaye. Kisi devta ne sirf tumhe choose kiya."

You are the only reborn from that batch. The other twenty-six went to the Void. Some deity chose only you.

"Kaun?" The word came out rough. Who?

"Unknown. Tumhara divine sponsor field blank hai. Jo bhi tha, identification nahi chodi. Yeh — " she paused, choosing her next words with the precision of someone who understood that information was currency "— yeh unusual hai. Devta apne reborn ko claim karte hain. Credit lete hain. Koi anonymously sponsor kare — yeh rare hai. Aur concerning."

Unknown. Your divine sponsor field is blank. Whoever it was didn't leave identification. This is unusual. Deities claim their reborn. Take credit. For someone to sponsor anonymously — this is rare. And concerning.

Guruji's expression had changed during this exchange. The pride was gone. In its place was something harder — not anger, not fear, but the alert stillness of a predator that has detected a scent it recognises.

"Ketaki," he said. "Yeh baat baad mein. Pehle — tu yahan kyun aayi? Sirf milne nahi aayi."

This discussion later. First — why are you here? You didn't come just to visit.

Ketaki's cool expression cracked — not much, just a hairline fracture in the composure, a micro-expression that Arjun's enhanced Vanara perception caught and his human brain interpreted as fear.

"Bhogavati mein kuch ho raha hai," she said. "Narada ne mujhe bheja — tumse baat karne. Voh kehte hain ki neeche se kuch aa raha hai. Saatvein starr se neeche — Void ke kinare se."

Something is happening in Bhogavati. Narada sent me — to talk to you. He says something is coming from below. From below the seventh level — from the edge of the Void.

The Void. The darkness. The place Arjun had floated in before being reborn. The place where the other twenty-six passengers of the 332 Limited had gone and would remain forever.

Guruji was silent for a long time. The kind of silence that only an immortal can produce — not the silence of someone who doesn't know what to say but the silence of someone who knows exactly what to say and is deciding whether to say it.

"Andhaka," he said finally. The name fell into the chamber like a stone into a well, the sound dropping and dropping and finding no bottom.

Ketaki's composure cracked further. "Tum sure ho?"

"Andhaka hamesha se neeche raha hai. Void ke kinare pe. Hazar saal se zyada. Lekin agar woh hil raha hai — agar woh Void ke kinare se upar aa raha hai — toh koi usse jagaya hai. Aur jo usse jagaya hai, woh ya toh bahut powerful hai ya bahut bewakoof."

Andhaka has always been below. At the edge of the Void. For more than a thousand years. But if he is stirring — if he is rising from the Void's edge — then someone has woken him. And whoever woke him is either very powerful or very foolish.

"Ya dono," Ketaki said. Or both.

"Ya dono."

Arjun stood. His ribs protested. He ignored them. "Andhaka kaun hai?"

Who is Andhaka?

Guruji and Ketaki looked at him. The look they shared was the look of adults who have been reminded that a child is in the room — not dismissive, not unkind, but weighted with the recognition that the explanation required would take longer than the question had taken to ask.

"Andhaka," Guruji said, "Shiva ka putra hai. Andha paida hua tha — isliye naam Andhaka. Lekin andha hona disability nahi hai Patala mein. Andhaka ne apni aankhon ki jagah aur kuch develop kiya — ek perception jo light pe depend nahi karti. Woh Void ko feel kar sakta hai. Void mein dekh sakta hai. Aur Void — Void usse sunti hai."

Andhaka is Shiva's son. Born blind — hence the name Andhaka. But blindness is not a disability in Patala. Andhaka developed something in place of his eyes — a perception that doesn't depend on light. He can feel the Void. See into the Void. And the Void — the Void listens to him.

"What does he want?"

The question was in English. Arjun hadn't spoken English since his death — there was no one in Patala who understood it — and the words came out strange, the Vanara vocal cords struggling with the phonemes. But the meaning was clear.

Guruji answered in the language they all shared — the hybrid of Hindi and Sanskrit and Patala's own tongue that served as the underworld's lingua franca.

"Woh upar jaana chahta hai. Patala se Mrityuloka tak. Saat starron ke through. Barrier ko todna chahta hai — woh barrier jo marton ki duniya ko neeche ki duniya se alag rakhti hai. Agar woh todega, toh Patala ki shakti Mrityuloka mein beh jayegi. Aur Mrityuloka ki zindagi Patala mein. Dono duniyaen barbaad."

He wants to go up. From Patala to Mrityuloka. Through all seven levels. Break the barrier — the barrier that separates the mortal world from the underworld. If he breaks it, Patala's power will flood into the mortal world. And the mortal world's life will flood into Patala. Both worlds destroyed.

Mumbai. His mother. The flat in Ghatkopar. The 332 Limited's route, running empty now, twenty-seven fewer passengers. All of it — flooded. Destroyed. By a blind god rising from the dark.

Arjun's hands clenched. The broken ribs screamed. He didn't care.

"Toh hum kya karenge?" he asked. Then what do we do?

Guruji looked at him. The assessment again — but different this time. Not evaluating what Arjun was. Evaluating what Arjun might become.

"Train harder," the old man said. "Bahut zyada harder."


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