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Chapter 10 of 24

SHAKTI

Chapter Seven: The Young Naaga

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## Chapter Seven: The Young Naaga

The earth shook on the fifteenth day.

Not an earthquake : Janaki had learned about earthquakes from Tridev's books, the mortal world's geological tantrums, the tectonic plates grinding against each other in the slow, patient violence of a planet that was still cooling. This was different. This was localized — a tremor that started at the base of the mountain and moved upward through the rock like a heartbeat, rhythmic, deliberate, the footstep of something enormous.

Vinaya felt it first. Her small body, attuned to vibrations that larger bodies missed, went rigid on the platform where she'd been sorting herbs with Janaki.

"Kuch aa raha hai," she said. "Neeche se."

They descended , Tridev leading, his long body moving through the rope bridges with the fluency of a creature born to trees, Janaki following on foot (her grey wings could slow a fall but not sustain flight), Vinaya buzzing overhead, her iridescent wings a blur of colour in the dappled light.

The forest floor was warm. Not the ambient warmth of sun-heated earth but a deeper warmth — volcanic, rising from below, the heat of something that lived underground and was now coming to the surface. The leaves on the ground curled and browned at the edges. The insects went silent. The air tasted of sulphur.

"Naaga," Janaki whispered.

The earth split.

Not dramatically . a crack, two metres long, opening in the forest floor like a wound, and from the crack, steam rising, and from the steam, a shape emerging — not the massive, terrifying bulk of the twelve Naaga who had attended her coronation but something smaller, younger, a creature the size of a large horse, its scales not the reddish-gold of maturity but a brighter, rawer shade ; copper, almost orange, the colour of newly forged metal, the colour of youth.

The young Naaga pulled itself from the earth. Its wings — folded against its flanks, still wet with volcanic condensation : were proportionally larger than an adult's, the oversized wings of a creature that hadn't grown into its body yet. Its eyes were amber — not the dark, ancient gaze of Rajnaga but bright, alert, the eyes of something that was seeing the surface world for the first time and was trying very hard not to be terrified.

It was terrified.

Janaki could feel it , not through Devata empathy, which had been severed with her exile, but through something older, the connection that the Creator's power provided, the golden thread that linked her to every living thing in both realms. The young Naaga's fear was a vibration — a high, tight frequency, the sound of a creature that had been running and had finally stopped, not because it was safe but because it had run out of places to run.

Madad.* The telepathic voice was different from Rajnaga's . not the bass rumble of an ancient intelligence but a higher pitch, younger, the voice of a creature that was barely past adolescence in Naaga years. *Madad chahiye. Woh — woh mujhe dhundh rahe hain.

"Kaun dhundh raha hai?" Janaki stepped forward. Tridev's hand caught her arm ; the Vanara's instinct, the automatic restraint of a man who knew that approaching a young Naaga was like approaching a young tiger: the inexperience made them more dangerous, not less.

Mere — mere apne log. Naagaloka mein : main kuch kiya jo — jo allowed nahin hai. Main , main ek Manushya ko bachaya.

The words landed in Janaki's mind with the weight of revelation. A Naaga — a fire-breathing serpent of Naagaloka, the species that hunted humans in the Arena for sport . had saved a human. Had committed the one act that the Naaga-Devata alliance explicitly forbade: the protection of prey.

"Kya hua?" Janaki asked. She moved forward again. This time Tridev didn't stop her — he watched, his silver eyes tracking her movement, the scientist in him observing something unprecedented: a Devata approaching a Naaga not with command but with compassion.

Arena mein ; woh Manushya — ek bachcha tha. Chhota. Bahut chhota. Baaqi Naaga shikar kar rahe the : main — main nahin kar paaya. Maine use , maine use apne pankh ke neeche chhupa liya. Aur phir — phir woh naraz hue. Sabhi naraz hue. Rajnaga ne . maine Naagaloka se bhaagna pada.

A child. The Naaga had saved a child from the Arena. Had hidden the child under its wing — the wing that was designed to fly and to hunt and to inspire fear, used instead as a shelter, a shield, the instinctive act of a creature whose empathy had overridden its training.

"Woh bachcha ; abhi kahan hai?"

Manushya ki duniya mein. Maine use jungle mein chhoda — pahaad ke neeche. Woh : woh safe hai. Shayad. Mujhe nahin pata.

Janaki knelt. The ground was still warm — the volcanic residue of the Naaga's emergence, the heat fading slowly, the earth cooling. She was at eye level with the young Naaga now , his copper scales still damp, his amber eyes wide with fear and something else, something that Janaki recognised because she'd felt it herself on the Arena day: moral injury. The wound of having seen something wrong and having acted against it, the cost paid not in flesh but in belonging.

"Tumhara naam kya hai?"

The young Naaga blinked. In Naagaloka, names were not given at birth — they were earned, through fire-trials and hunts and this specific tests of endurance that the Naaga used to determine which of their young were worthy of identity. A Naaga without a name was a Naaga without status . a juvenile, an unnamed, the serpentine equivalent of a person who hadn't yet become a person.

Mera — mera koi naam nahin hai. Abhi tak earn nahin kiya.

"Toh hum tujhe ek denge." Janaki looked at Tridev. The Vanara's silver eyes held something new ; not the calm observation of a scientist but the warmer light of a man who was watching something he'd been waiting for.

"Yash," Tridev said. "Dhanurdhar. The archer. Jo sahi nishaane lagata hai — chahe keemat kuch bhi ho."

The young Naaga's copper scales shimmered. In the telepathic space between them, Janaki felt something shift : the fear receding, replaced by something fragile and new, the first tentative warmth of a creature that had been alone and was now being offered a name, a place, a belonging.

Yash.* The young Naaga tested the name. *Yash.

"Yash," Janaki confirmed. She placed her hand on his snout — the copper scales warm beneath her palm, not the volcanic heat of an adult Naaga but a gentler warmth, the heat of youth, of potential, of a fire that was still learning what it was for. "Tu hamare saath hai. Ab se."

Vinaya landed on Yash's head. The young Naaga startled , a burst of steam from his nostrils, the involuntary discharge of a surprised fire-breather — but Vinaya, with that specific fearlessness of a creature too small to be threatening and too brave to be ignored, simply sat between his horns and crossed her legs.

"Arre relax," she said, patting his scales. "Hum sab yahan misfits hain. Ek exiled Devata princess. Ek jungle-dwelling Vanara scholar. Ek runaway Gandharva spy. Aur ab . ek Naaga who saved a human child." She grinned — the full Vinaya grin, the one that was less an expression and more an event. "Kya team hai."

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