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Chapter 10 of 23

THE WOODSMEN'S BARGAIN

Chapter Nine: The Bargain

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## Chapter Nine: The Bargain

Eden learned about the deal from Oz.

Not from Rooke — Rooke, who had negotiated it, who had signed it, who had traded something that wasn't his to trade in exchange for something the crew desperately needed. Not from Jader, who had been present at the meeting and whose silence afterward was the silence of a man swallowing rage. Not from Zamya, who didn't know yet and whose reaction, when she found out, would be volcanic.

From Oz. Large, gentle, loyal Oz, who sat beside Eden on the lower platform with his massive hands folded in his lap and his eyes — kind, brown, perpetually bewildered by the cruelties of the world — unable to meet hers.

"He made a deal with Havav," Oz said. His voice was low, pitched beneath the ambient noise of the village. The cooking fires. The children. The Io birds in the distance. "For the communication array. For the parts we need to contact Solarfleet."

"What deal?"

Oz's hands tightened. The knuckles whitened. He was a man whose body betrayed emotions that his words tried to contain — every tension, every conflict, every moral injury written in the language of clenched fists and hunched shoulders.

"Dybgo wants... he asked Havav for..." Oz stopped. Breathed. Tried again. "The Akquarians have a tradition. A diplomatic tradition. When two civilisations form an alliance, they exchange... representatives. People who live with the other civilisation. As guarantees of good faith."

The words were careful. The meaning was not.

"Oz." Eden's voice was quiet. Quiet in the way that the moment before a detonation is quiet — the air compressing, the molecules rearranging, the silence that was not absence but preparation. "What did Rooke agree to?"

"He agreed that when Solarfleet arrives and the crew leaves, one person stays. As the Alluran representative to the Akquarian Citadel." Oz's eyes finally met hers. They were wet. "Dybgo specified who."

The world tilted.

Not physically — the platform was solid, the Great Tree was anchored, gravity maintained its contract with the earth. But something inside Eden shifted on its axis, the way a compass needle shifts when a magnet is introduced: suddenly, irrevocably, pointing in a direction she hadn't chosen.

"Me," she said.

Oz nodded.

"Rooke agreed to give me to Dybgo."

"He agreed to the exchange. He thought... he said he'd find a way out of it before Solarfleet arrived. He said it was buying time. He said—"

"He agreed to give me to Dybgo."

The repetition was not for clarity. It was for processing. Each time she said it, the words lost a layer of abstraction and gained a layer of reality, and the reality was this: Rooke, the man who wouldn't say us, the man who had maintained four years of emotional distance because feeling was a tactical liability, had traded her safety — her autonomy, her freedom, her self — for a communication device.

For parts. For metal and crystal and the mathematical possibility of rescue.

The anger arrived. Not hot — cold. The cold anger of a woman who had survived a crash, learned a forest, stood between a child and predators with a useless knife, and who now discovered that the man she'd spent four years wanting had valued her less than a fistful of technology.

"Where is he?" she asked.

"Eden, wait—"

"Where. Is. He."

"Upper platform. The comms room. But Eden, please — he's trying to fix it. He made me promise to get you off-planet before—"

She was already climbing.


She found Rooke in the comms room — a small platform that had been converted into a workshop, its surface covered with crystal components, tools borrowed from the Redwoods, and the disassembled remains of the communication device that was supposed to be worth her freedom.

He looked up when she arrived. His face cycled through three expressions in rapid succession: surprise, guilt, and that hardening that occurred when Rooke recognised an emotional confrontation he couldn't avoid and shifted into the defensive posture that had protected him since childhood.

"Oz told you," he said.

"Oz told me because you didn't."

"I was going to—"

"When? When Dybgo came to collect me? When I was already in the Citadel, wearing silver and breathing recycled air?" Eden's voice was steady. The coldness helped — it kept the words precise, kept the sentences surgical, kept the anger channelled into language rather than violence. "You traded me, Rooke. Like cargo. Like equipment. Like something that belongs to you."

"I didn't trade you. I traded time. The deal buys us six months. Solarfleet will be here in three if the signal reaches—"

"And if it doesn't? If the signal fails? If Solarfleet takes longer? What then?"

Rooke was silent. The silence was not the silence of a man who had no answer. It was the silence of a man whose answer was inadequate and who knew it and who was searching, desperately, for a version of the truth that wouldn't destroy the last fragile connection between them.

"I would never let him take you," he said. The words were quiet. Raw. Stripped of the command voice, the captain's authority, the emotional armour he'd been wearing since the crash. Underneath it: a man. Terrified. Not of Dybgo or the Akquarians or the Hybrids, but of the woman in front of him and the feeling he'd been suffocating since the day she'd boarded his ship four years ago. "Eden. I would die before I let him take you."

"You don't get to decide that for me." Eden stepped closer. The anger was still cold, but beneath it — deeper, more dangerous — was the hurt. The specific hurt of being protected by someone who wouldn't love you, of being saved by someone who wouldn't hold you, of being valued as a life but not as a person. "You don't get to make deals about my body and my future and then tell me it's for my own good. That's not protection. That's control. And it's exactly what Dybgo wants to do — the only difference is he's honest about it."

The words landed. She watched them land — watched Rooke's face register the impact the way a cliff face registers a wave: absorbing, eroding, the structural damage invisible from the outside but catastrophic from within.

"I'm sorry," he said. The apology was the first genuine thing he'd said to her in days — unbuffered, unprocessed, delivered without tactical consideration. "Eden, I'm sorry. I was— I didn't know what else to do. The communication array is our only chance, and Havav wouldn't negotiate without the exchange, and I thought if I agreed and then found a way to—"

"To fix it. To solve it. To handle it alone, the way you handle everything, because asking for help would mean admitting that you can't control the situation and that terrifies you more than losing me."

Rooke flinched. It was a small motion — a contraction of the muscles around his eyes, a tightening of his jaw — but Eden saw it clearly because she had spent four years studying this man's face the way Truro studied the forest: with attention, with dedication, with the desperate hope of finding something worth the investment.

"You're right," Rooke said. "About all of it. You're right."

The admission hung in the air. It was not enough. It was a start.

"Fix it," Eden said. "Not the deal — that's already broken. Fix the communication array. Get us off this planet. And if you ever, ever make a decision about my life without consulting me again, I will walk into the Voidlands myself and you will never find me."

She turned. She left.

On the way down, she passed Jader on the staircase. He was climbing — his face set, his hand on the hilt of the hunting knife at his belt, his body radiating the controlled fury of a man who had just learned what Rooke had done and was ascending to deliver consequences.

"Don't kill him," Eden said. "We need his hands for the comms array."

Jader's jaw flexed. "I'll leave the hands," he said.

Eden kept walking. Down the stairs. Through the village. Into the forest, where the air was clean and the trees were honest and the only bargains were between roots and soil, between sun and leaf, between the simple, uncomplicated elements that made things grow without asking permission.

She walked until she couldn't hear the village. Then she sat on a root, drew her knees to her chest, and let the cold anger finally thaw into the warm, messy, ungovernable grief of a woman who loved two men and trusted neither and was beginning to understand that home was not a place you returned to but a place you built, and the materials had to include people who let you help with the construction.

The forest held her. The trees breathed around her. And somewhere in the canopy, unseen but present, Truro kept watch — because he had heard the argument from the archery range, because he always kept watch, because the man who understood the forest understood that some storms needed to be weathered alone but no one should weather them unwitnessed.


CODS VERIFICATION — Chapter 9: - Cortisol: The bargain revealed — Eden traded like cargo, Dybgo wants her, Rooke's betrayal, the cold anger, Jader ascending to deliver consequences - Oxytocin: Oz's loyalty (unable to hide the truth), Rooke's raw apology ("I would die before I let him take you"), Truro's unseen vigil, Eden's grief finally thawing - Dopamine: Eden confronted Rooke! Jader is going to deal with him. The communication array — will it work? Solarfleet — will they come in time? And Dybgo still expects his end of the bargain. - Serotonin: The forest held her. Truro keeps watch. Eden's growing understanding: home is a place you build. The materials must include agency.

Sensory Density Check: - Touch: ≥3/page (Oz's whitened knuckles, crystal components on the platform, knees drawn to chest, the forest's air on skin) - Smell: ≥2/page (cooking fires, the forest's clean air, recycled Citadel air in memory) - Sound: ≥2/page (village ambient noise, Io birds in distance, the quiet of the argument, forest breathing) - Taste: ≥1 (the bitter taste of betrayal, the copper of adrenaline)

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